Thank you to Pensivity101 so much for the tell a story nomination. The picture below has been kindly provided to base a story on.
This took me completely out of my comfort zone. Apologies in advance if it’s not very good – not done this sort of thing before. But it was fun.
The cold icy breath. So cold so harsh. No remorse. No forgiveness. False love.
Imprisoned. Shackled in this world. No release. No hope. Isolation.
Am I trapped within the ring or shackled by wearing it. It doesn’t matter. Nothing matters any more. Trapped in a faceless world. A world of grey. A world of nothingness. Constant pressure crushing my body. Restricting my breath. Silencing my screams. That cold breath. Professing love but feeding on my soul.
That is my life, my torture, entombed by that RING.
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Well that went somewhere I wasn’t planning. My idea was to make it funny, sort of went a bit off track. SORRY.
I now have to nominate 3 bloggers with the invitation to write a story or poem from my choice of picture, then pass on the invite to another three and their choice and so on and so forth.
Nominations please only do this if you really want to do this. Completely no obligation.
The picture
Please don’t apologise. This was beautiful. Expression cannot be judged. No one knows or understand another fully, therefor there should only be learning and discovering. No judging. Congratulations.
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Thank you so much. 🙏
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For not doing this before, this is quite good. I enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome!
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I thought this was terrific! Great job.
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Very kind. Not sure the joke punch line worked……
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Still good though!
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Thank you
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That was a great story! No need to apologize at all!
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Thank you, you are so kind.
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The story? you wrote is fantastic. I could feel what you felt. You were writing from the soul. :))
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Thank you so much.
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We should write about what we know and have felt in our own lives.:))
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I liked it, very interesting. Glad you wrote it, surprising yourself, keep on writing : )
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Part of me feels oh so more comfortable doing stories about rubbish parenting. Thank you so much.
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Very good, you should try it more often!
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Thank you. We will see.
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Great story! And great pic for your nominees!
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Thank you.
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Very nice. Great job! 🙂
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Thank you so much.
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It is always a joy to read your posts.
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Thank you, it’s always great to hear from you.
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I connected with these words in so, so many ways. These words traveled where they needed to travel.
I shall see what I can do with your challenge. 🙂 xxxxx
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I am so pleased. I honestly thought it was going to be a funny story about a miniature talking frog but the stuff which is swirling in my mind currently took over …. I better not take a job in live kiddies TV script writing. xxxxxxx.
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Ha! Hmm. No, that may not be the place for you. x
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That’s another career biting the dust…..
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Hmmm … 🤔 🤔 🤔 Ever the pragmatist, I have struggled with poetry and deep-hidden-meaning literature all my life. So, I read this, read it again, and said to meself … “Then why the heck did she accept the ring if it was going to make her so miserable?” It is why I also cannot write fiction … I’ve tried, but I simply cannot. But don’t let it bother you … I drove my college literature teacher to drink in my freshman year, for I take everything quite literally, at face value. 😉
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Maybe the ring was accepted before she realised that her heart had been tricked…. But you read your blog and I can see such a gifted creative mind. Still time for you to pen that political thriller.
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Perhaps, and it’s true that we sometimes want love so badly that we put on blinders. Believe me, I’ve tried. I can write non-fiction, politics, social commentary, history, but fiction just falls flat for me. That said, I recently started one last attempt … fingers crossed, we will see how it goes! And thanks for the kind words!
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Just remember your friends when you become the next Tom Clancy…
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I surely will remember my friends … my dedication page will be several pages long!
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Nice! It’s amazing what you can get inspired to write from a picture… ✍📷
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It is even someone like me.
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True that. A ring is a symbol of imprisonment.
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Often is…
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A bit off that track, yes. 😀 I agree that it’s fantastic, though.
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Thank you so much.
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